This is a lovely story, full of ambivalence. I would have liked to know what Peter and David made of each other when Peter turned up on David's doorstep years later. Perhaps that is another story? Though may be it doesn't have any objects in it.
Thank you, David. My writing group wanted more at the same point, but I thought it would unbalance the whole piece. And yes, the relation with David was always full of ambivalence.
This is a lovely story, full of ambivalence. I would have liked to know what Peter and David made of each other when Peter turned up on David's doorstep years later. Perhaps that is another story? Though may be it doesn't have any objects in it.
Thank you, David. My writing group wanted more at the same point, but I thought it would unbalance the whole piece. And yes, the relation with David was always full of ambivalence.